Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.
Nowadays, study or work in abroad is becoming more popular. For many people, especially it is an advantage to go abroad and gain new opportunities for their career growth. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the reasons why moving abroad is so popular and some of the changes to be overcome.
Let us begin by looking at the advantages of moving foreign country. One of the main positives of heading overseas is that it broadens your horizons. What I mean by this is that you have the chance to meet people from different culture backgrounds and learn to cope with foreign customs and food. This can make you more rounded it as a person.
Secondly, moving abroad to a better quality of life. Take an example of Indian People. Thousands of people from India move to abroad for study basis and for Job purpose. People finds new opportunities outside the country. These counties have encouraged to have a better and balanced work-life. Moreover, by living overseas, you can gain more qualification and skills which helps to promote your career.
Turing to the other side of the coin, if there are pros, then are also some cons as well. The major problem is culture shock. Many people who take a year out find it hard to cope with the communication hurdle, the food and general cultural difference. This often leads to homesickness and in some cases a sense of isolation. Another issue is that it is difficult to start a new life from scratch. In other words, when you move abroad you must make new friends and find your place in the community. Moreover, if there is language barrier, it takes time and can be challenging to deal with.
All things considered, starting life in a foreign country is never easy. You need to weigh up the pros of the better lifestyle, weather and so on, and cons of the culture shock and language barrier. Personally, I believe the benefits in terms of personal growth eventually outweigh any negatives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'dealing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: dealing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, i mean, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6862745098 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55318402704 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1079170215 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.7083333333 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.875 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108810939649 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025687132195 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430866081242 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0497776980495 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373454273248 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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