Biodiversity is the natures way to balance ecosystem, every living animal is co-dependent to the relative species around them. However, humans for decades have disrespected the thought of biodiversity to serve their selfish agenda. The below essay will elaborate why saving animals should the primary concern.
TO begin with, why is biodiversity necessary?. As we humans have evolved to be self dependent, we have stopped acknowledging the importance of co-dependency. For instance, pouching animals for their fur and other parts has reduced the number of tigers in Indian rain-forest, thereby, creating a imbalance in the ecosystem. The number of deer have increased drastically, consequently, decline in biodiversity of herbs and smaller plants that deer's usually feed on. Furthermore, smaller plans are important to refurbishing the minerals within the soil, subsequently, the forest soil is loosing its potency to house the vast range of biodiversity rain-forest has to offer. Additionally, de-forestation is escalating the problem in hand. With forest being cut down to house the increasing number of population, animals are left with more than half of their land being stripped off. For instance, kollegal forest has lost 50% of its land to deforestation, furthermore, animals are now invading into human space.
On the other hand, humans now have realized the importance of biodiversity, government has takes important steps to mitigate the damage done by humans. For example, the vast census done by the government of India to identify the exact number tigers living in India, they tagged every single tiger and started to track them to prevent pouching, moreover, strict laws are passed against pouching, this forces people to abide bu the law. These steps have yielded good results, now the number of tigers are increasing day by day.
To conclude, although biodiversity is on a declining scale, mother nature has the ability to heal itself in an astonishing speed, if given abundance time and care.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38924050633 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99155430034 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598101265823 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9306010273 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.533333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100644839677 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355895112883 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378830501552 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560252323749 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465512061551 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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