In a society with a good lifestyle it is mandatory to have a clean and tidy ambiance. Some believe it is the responsibility of the government to maintain cleanliness while the rest believe that it is the citizen's duty. In my opine it is the government's job to clean the city and its the multitude's duty to maintain it tidy.
To commence with, Annually massive amount of funds are collected by the government in the form of taxes from the citizenry, So this makes sanitary a right for every citizen in the country. Government should enforce a tidy infrastructure in order to maintain cleanliness, they should allot extensive dustbins to every lane so that people can dump their trash on daily basis. further more, the ministry is liable to appoint road cleaners on permanent or contract basis.
on the other hand, The public should be the change what they are expecting from the country, to elaborate, everyone likes and deserve a clean environment but folks dirty the places which are likely away from their homes as it will hardly make any difference to them but this directly effects the lives of people staying close to trash pits. Major life threatening diseases are caused by improper accumulation of biological and non biodegradable wastes.
To re-captivate, the government is liable for the cleanliness of the country in order to provide healthy and ideal lifestyles to their citizens and I also support the notion that the citizens should act responsible and maintain a clean and tidy atmosphere
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...s while the rest believe that it is the citizens duty. In my opine it is the governments...
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Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...e governments job to clean the city and its the multitudes duty to maintain it tidy...
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Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'tidies'?
Suggestion: tidies
... its the multitudes duty to maintain it tidy. To commence with, Annually massive am...
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Line 2, column 374, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Further
...le can dump their trash on daily basis. further more, the ministry is liable to appoint...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...eaners on permanent or contract basis. on the other hand, The public should be th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93307086614 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82767351218 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570866141732 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.9111690927 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.222222222 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2222222222 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310744609111 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104540632015 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719626075822 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167544762751 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02114421907 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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