Although more and more people read the news on internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that with the advent of the internet people are shifting towards online news forums rather than traditional newspapers. This essay will present my view supporting the statement.
Firstly, the advantages of online news significantly surpass those of printed newspapers. This is because, most of the people around the world use gadgets such as smart phones and tablets which gives them easy access to digital news forums that fulfil the quest of news readers for up-to-date news. Conversely, newspapers deliver information on a delay as they have to be edited, printed and published and this, in turn, fails to provide fast-moving and instant updates. This, in turn, is causing more and more news global news publications such as BBC, The Guardian and New York Times focus on publishing news online.
Moreover, as the internet is a repository of information, people can read local as well as international news and the web presents news seekers with a wide array of information. While, newspapers are geographically limited and their reach and exposure levels are substantially limited. Furthermore, news about any incident happening miles away could be retrieved within seconds on click of a button. Whereas, traditional newspapers render news one day later.
In conclusion, greater accessibility and the instant updates are the two vital reasons why I believe conventional newspapers will become obsolete and inconvenient.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed within seconds on click of a button. Whereas, traditional newspapers render news one...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41333333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97832167504 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648888888889 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0540396207 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.727272727 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325673847551 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105610438664 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738181557816 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163849068491 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761997340345 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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