It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is widely recognized that some children are born with special talents in different fields such as sport or music whereas others might be not. While I tend to agree with this viewpoint, I do believe that any child could be trained and supported to become competent sport athletes or talented musicians.
On the one hand, gifted children born with certain talents are believed to easily reach success in their proper fields. A musician name Mozart, for example, he was fortunate to receive this talent, therefore he continued nurturing his gift and became a successful and famous musician. However, the number of these talented people might be still minor as there are various normal people exist around the world regarding their incapability of doing something excellent.
On the other hand, I believe that with enormous practices and constant supports, any child could have a chance to be good at any specific fields. Thanks to the high development of facilities, children nowadays tend to be received good training to nurture their competency. Moreover, parents also play a crucial part in each children's path of development. To be specifically, they would provide constant support to their child and therefore, these children could be motivated to develop specific skills by practicing daily. As a result, the children could develop and nurture their talent in terms of long-term practicing.
In conclusion, despite the fact that there are several viewpoints towards children who born with specific talents, I do believe any child could become proficient in any filed as long as they obtain good training and constant practicing
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'names'.
Suggestion: names
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24714828897 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68803813545 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2223160788 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.454545455 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9090909091 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9090909091 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293207097697 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111778861331 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697043095923 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186834467002 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661352906242 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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