Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different opinion about the appropriate age for education. While some think that it would be better for children to attend school since childhood, I side with those who believe that schooling should be implemented since 7 years.
There are various reasons why people think that traditional teaching should be introduced from early age. Youth can easily assimilate knowledge, digest it and store it in their mind. For example, it was proven that children from three to five acquire new languages quickly, also those who are exposed early to other languages display more positive attitudes to the cultures associated with those languages. The experience of learning a language introduces them to the world in ways they might otherwise have not experienced. However, in early age they cannot sift information, marshal facts, discriminate between sources. Therefore, they have no responsibility, and they are more passionate about the game rather than studying.
In spite of these arguments, I believe that by the age of seven, children are more socially responsible and the desire to become an adult awakens. In other words, this is due to the emergence of an internal position, which determines the child's attitude to himself, to others and to the world around him as a whole. As a result, the game fades into the background, cognitive activity comes to the fore. Furthermore, in this age children physically prepared, so by the age of seven, the child's body is capable of producing interferon, which protects the body from viruses. As an example, at school, they can catch up some kind of ailments, but their immune system will protect them.
In conclusion, it may seem logical to learn from early age, I prefer current system in which children attend school from the age of seven.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09491525424 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72878197687 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0099599463 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196516655479 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626881270979 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511563565974 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110664760321 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263642712651 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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