Some people argue that the government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and should make sure they have access to the Internet.
They believe this is the best way of using public money to reduce the problem of unemployment.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Unemployment rate is one of an important fact in terms of measuring a country’s development. Today, with socio- economic changes, some claim that the authorities must provide the job seekers a cellular phone with online access to ease the pressure by using the general funds. However, I completely disagree with this option, which could lead to a worsen scenario.
First, today, mobile phone is an essential component in modern lifestyle. availability of a mobile phone with internet may be an added advantage to apply for a job instantly, resulting the applicants to be in touch with the job market with regular updating. The local mobile apps and world reputed job apps such as, Seek, Air BNB has cleared the way to the applicants search on global job market.
On the flipped side, the mobile phone is an attractive for various activities, such as entertainments, searching engine etc. the unemployed youth may not hook-on phones with searching jobs. They could be easily addicted to any other mobile facility and may mis use the facility for various illegal activities consequently. There are cases been reported widely, that the teenagers use modern high tech mobile phones to hack personal and institutional devises and networks. Drug dealings, kidnapping. This would be a unavoidable fact to increase various criminal matters where the governments may have to contribute more funds on health and social impacts. Moreover, reserving public money on unemployment sector may not be a huge hit to the total fund for developed countries and with its lower rate, but could be unbearable amount for poor countries such as Sri Lanka, India, with its large unemployment rate and weak economy.
In sum up, I re emphasis that the governments should not serve a total package of mobile bundle, but can support financially with some restrictions such as online access only on job seeking apps or job information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e with this option, which could lead to a worsen scenario. First, today, mobile phone ...
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Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Availability
...ssential component in modern lifestyle. availability of a mobile phone with internet may be ...
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Line 4, column 514, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rug dealings, kidnapping. This would be a unavoidable fact to increase various cr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14423076923 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83267881696 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5122436987 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178693416937 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599625631155 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275848982361 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10285266885 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031614270885 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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