In some countries, more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college, University or even after finding a job. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
It is becoming more ubiquitous that grown-ups are still living under the same roof with their parents even if they have graduated or been employed. From my perspective, its merits are overshadowed by its demerits.
To begin with, one advantage is that people can concentrate more on developing their career paths. In other words, they have their parents look after the houses, thus reducing the amount of housework, or even not having to pay any attention to the chores. For example, after workers come home from work and are exhausted, they always have a meal prepared for them. What can be inferred from this is that adults will be able to allocate more time to relaxing if they live with their families.
Despite the aforementioned benefit, I am of the opinion that the disadvantages have a more significant bearing. One disadvantage is that if people do not live alone, they will lose the chance to experience life at first hand; consequently, they cannot better shape recognition of the world and broaden their knowledge. secondly, those adults might be so dependent on their parents that they can not make both ends meet, which imposes financial burden on their families. Finally, generation gap culminates in disputes. Parents want to introduce regulations on their children, take sleeping hours as an example: children may think that it is their right to go to bed at any time as they are older than 18 years old.
In conclusion, although adults living with parents may limit their scope of knowledge, create financial burden, and cause disagreement, they can be caught up in the overwhelming workload without taking into consideration the housework. However, the advantages of this trend still pale in comparison to any of its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
... the world and broaden their knowledge. secondly, those adults might be so dependent on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06896551724 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82585312742 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610344827586 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1726004986 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296147430037 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10082884587 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612344617895 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183837079491 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567524454279 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.