Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development?
The trend of delivering courses online by various institutes is burgeoning these days. In my opinion, this is a very negative development that leads to distractions in studies and isolates students from society.
Firstly, Lack of concentration in studies at home is the major problem. That is to say, classrooms in colleges are designed in such a way that pupils can focus fully on their work that might not be possible at knows due to distraction by family members which cast an adverse effect on the grades of children. Moreover, in universities, learners are under the supervision of their teachers, thus it becomes essential for them to pay attention. In a recent survey conducted at the end of 2020, when students were taught wired due to the COVID-19 epidemic, a drastic fall has been seen in the performance of youngsters.
Social isolation is another prominent consequence of delivering lectures online. In other words, when youngsters visit universities to attend lectures, they socialize with people having varied interests, therefore, it helps them to maintain a social circle which further gives rise to unity and harmony, but learning on the internet make them detached from their friends and family, and they generally confined under the four walls of their house and also might have to face some serious psychometric issues such as anxiety and depression. Medical research has shown that about 45% of people are suffering from mental issues because they do not mix up with their peers.
On balance, although the trend of doing networked courses is becoming popular, it has bought too many problems for this to be considered a positive trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, so, therefore, thus, such as, in my opinion, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77079078503 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650735294118 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.339466493 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.4 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209874528757 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649005563225 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475766463478 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113503210072 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489783838756 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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