By getting information from the other persons its a better option according to some people but other side gaining the knowledge by internet is a better idea. By elaborating i will discuss both view point.
On the one hand side, recieve information by the others is the good option because our elder have much knowledge of everything by their previous time. In every work we want to do, we can gain knowledge by the experienced person who have already done the same value of work. One more thing, by knowing the information from others we can realised their Mentality skills because they also can share their ups and downs.
On the other side, internet is a specific and easiest way to recieve information because in this there are not any interference from other, we can search any kind of knowledge and can achieved separately and secretly. By using internet, we can watch videos of related our searching information so, this is the special feature which we can use.
To recapitulate, digitalize information gives us same knowledge for everyone but other handed all person have there own idea, everyone provide knowledge by their own experiences so, i gave first priority to the internet.
- Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational,otherwise they are a complete waste of time.Do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience. 56
- Young people say that traveling to different countries benefits them and society. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion. 56
- In many countries there is a shortage of suitable people for essential jobs.What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it? Give reasons fro your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowled 56
- In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem.What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem? (Reported 2017, Academic Test) 78
- some people think that it is better to get information or advice from other people while others believe that one can get information from the internet or books discuss both views and give your own opinion 43
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ting information from the other persons its a better option according to some peopl...
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Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ternet is a better idea. By elaborating i will discuss both view point. On th...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'realise'
Suggestion: realise
...wing the information from others we can realised their Mentality skills because they als...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: THERE_OWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
...eryone but other handed all person have there own idea, everyone provide knowledge by the...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... knowledge by their own experiences so, i gave first priority to the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93564356436 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66987775575 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0479046168 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.625 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346248795161 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159135539592 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109061552307 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230855409772 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123562481255 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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