Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would he more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In life, opportunities do not come daily and we should avail the golden chances in life. Some people are inclined toward the attitude that a person should do a job that satisfies mentally, whereas others hold a different perspective. I personally, though, believe that people should take the job instead of waiting for a perfect one. In the following essay, I intend to put forth points and reasons for support.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that time is the most important factor in all things because waiting will waste the time and in that time a good amount can be earned. In contrast, waiting is not a good choice as there are thousands of people who are suffering from a financial crisis. My brother's experience is a compelling example of this situation. My brother had done his graduation from a well-known university and he is an electrical engineer. He applied at my place for a job but unfortunately, he is getting offers out of the field with a low salary so he keeps on rejecting the job offers. As result, now it's been 3 years he is jobless because he has a big gap after graduation and still has no experience. Therefore, this experience is a good example of refuting jobs.
Secondly, nothing can satisfy a person because it is human nature. Jobs meant to help people in earning. Everyone wants more and more in life no work can satisfies them. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. When I became a pharmacist I always wanted to do a job related to my field with good pay but in our country, there is no scope that's why i did not get an offer that satisfies me. In addition, I gave up and changed my field now I realize that I made the worst decision of my life. Thus, this experience taught me that always make choices that give benefits.
In light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly agree that whenever jobs come to you grab it rather than waiting and facing difficulty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: that's
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, whereas, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54341736695 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67627673078 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560224089636 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7016430467 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3684210526 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293524150854 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815394278197 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068778536425 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185428057338 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619986966613 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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