Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits of living in the cities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether living in the cities or the countryside have the propensity to adopt a healthier lifestyle. While some people maintain that city life has many health benefits, i agree that we are conducive to having a healthy lifestyle in the countryside.
On the one hand, living in urban areas allows residents to receive more modern amenities with regard to healthcare. Firstly, in terms of food supply, as people in big cities are provided with the wide range of nutritious and organic food in numerous convenience stores and supermarkets, they are able to cook nutrient-dense, superfood recipes for all seasons. Secondly, public health services are ubiquitous in countless parts of sprawling cities, meaning that urban dwellers have easier access to medical practitioners like doctors, nurses and dentists to diagnose, consult and care for them. It is also easy to adopt a fitness regime in cities, where there are gyms and municipal parks to take regular exercise.
On the other hand, i agree that rural areas provide essential benefits such as fresh air and tranquility. First of all, while people in urban areas could face the prospect of traffic congestion and the rocketing rate of air pollution due to the high population density, current habitants in rural regions are inclined to immerse themselves in a greener environment, enjoying the fresh ambience, and, as a result, escape from the hectic pace of city life. Second, countryside brings a more tranquil place where residents can meditate and relish quiet and uncontaminated country air , whereas urban life is filled with incessant roar of buses and trucks. In addition, individuals especially the elderly would adore the idea of living in this kind of environment to avoid poisonous emissions from industrial zone in big cities, and they would not suffer the physical and mental stress which results from the hustle and bustle of city life.
In conclusion, i believe that most aspects of city are incompatible with a healthy lifestyle, whereas country living facilitates the enjoyment of physical and mental well-being.
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- Many people are working longer and longer hours What are the reasons and effects 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3185840708 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81312267233 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607669616519 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.604566091 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.3 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.9 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.6 7.06120827912 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222434979974 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881931548724 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778228227248 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149477355241 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997043671017 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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