Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime.
To what extent do you agree?
Criminality ratio is widely increasing around the globe, which leads many humans to request their regime to bestow more security norms in order to maintain their safe environment. while some people opine that more police officers patrolling is one of the best aspects to mitigate the crime-rate, I believe that there are various other ways to alleviate violation of law.
Commencing with the most salient facter behind this phenomenon is, the sense of fear in the mind of offenders. What is more, the police patrolling can prevent illegal activities as the policemen are out on streets, especially in vielent areas, there will be loss illegal acts because wrongdoers can be caught lead handed. Thereby, this practice not only curbs the crime rate but also gives a sense of protectiveness to the plebeians.
However I do believe that placing more forck on the ground is not a particular solution of this bottleneck, many of other acts can be done for it. The first and foremost is, camera surveillance. In other words, the closed - circuit television cameras should be installed in terms of surveillance purposes. For an instance, several offices of law who are currput and have joined hands with ill-social entities in order to obtain king size life over the night. The bureaucracy needs to enforce the strict letter of the law so that such convicts get severe punishments, even though corporal punishment as well. Thus, the punishments or sentences will make people think twice before convicting a crime.
furthermore, the holistic governments should provide the amenities to educate the children about moral education at schools. Due to this, childern would be able to get enough knowledge about felony and rules as law-abiding citizens. Moreover, the regime should try to enforce the law on real groud as full weight of the law.
To conclude, installing more cops on the ground can assist to prevent lawlessness, although this is not an effective way. In order to reduce crime severely, the government needs to act as deterrent, whether it is possible by imposing ban on perpetrators or serving non-custodial sentences, so that no criminal gets out without any sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in other words, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14325842697 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79345168731 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637640449438 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0759341972 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.4375 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212791926081 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573487659224 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059687671712 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106334980976 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618785229022 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.