people in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often a bad example. Discuss the cause and some effects of widespread drug use byyoung people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
At an early age, adult have experience of legal and illegal drug. Today, where technology gets more sophisticated, people use a drug. Sociologists said that there are several people of society even parents give a negative example. This statement will discuss what the causes and give any recommendations to help youth solve this problem.
Many people are going to influence with environment around them. Members of society like friends can influence youth people to do the negative behavior such consume a drug. Drug is one of medicines that used on the world of health. In addition, in several countries drug is legal but only for the sake of health. Yet, there are still many people who misuse it. They sold a drug to society only want to get more profit. Moreover old people as parents did not care about this even they used a drug so it that teach a bad example to the younger generation.
What cause a drug to become public? The answer is supervision. Next, the drug which is exported from out of country did not oversee well. For instance, when it arrived, the aim is for medicine abused by those who should be held responsible for securing that. The government should more pay attention about this problem such have to double the surveillance on that pickup to keep it from failing into the wrong hands. Then, old people have to more aware about teenagers like change their behavior so that giving a positive example to them.
To sum up, observation towards a drug by government also the more attentiveness that is given by parents or even the members from society are able to impact adults to reduce utilizing of drug.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 419, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, still, then, well, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74647887324 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52554887963 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.510855549 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8888888889 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341546803886 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105932788748 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824036278901 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21586766597 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109427098028 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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