Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that traffic congestion and housing shortage could be tackled by relocating business offices and manufacturing plants to the rural areas. Personally, I believe that the solution above is not viable to alleviate the situation but conversely engender constraints for the civilians.
For one thing, it is indisputable that with a massive number of workers in the cities, the transportation systems are often overflowing with passengers in public as well as commuters in private vehicles for traveling to the workplaces. By moving to another spacious areas, the traffic jam could be relieved directly as a result and help lessen the amount of industrial particulates which affect one’s physique negatively. Furthermore, previous space for offices and factories could be used for residential areas and other recreational purposes such as public parks which allows the dwellers to adopt a fitness regime.
For another, in fairness, the relocation of enterprise building will not be beneficial to a group of people when geographical boundaries are the primary concern, hampering them from staying close with their families. Undoubtedly, the main factors of some when choosing careers is that the work environments have to meet both the income needs and reasonable distance to travel. Moving to the countryside will consume more time and traffic fees, which is not an affordable option for the workers. Furthermore, from an educational perspective, children of which parents will lack parental guidance, which is crucial in their formative years as their parents are often exhausted of commuting in such a long interval to stay close with their families.
To conclude, the suggestion of adjusting the workplace to rural areas is not pragmatic to surmount the scarcity of housing and traffic problems. Yet, the authorities should take into account different measures to safeguard the rights of the masses and resolve the issues within the cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, furthermore, if, so, well, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43278688525 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96493164713 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593442622951 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.3463500343 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.636363636 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147341404805 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547349251204 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475542500757 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813403930851 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020010173145 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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