Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary life, many a person supposes that all wild animals do not need to be kept in zoos whereas others think that zoos have some good reasons for their existence. From my perspective, wild animals deserve to have a life in their own habitats instead of being kept in captivity.
To begin with, there are some functions of zoos accounting for their existence in our community. To save endangered animals’ lives is the first reason for their appearance; to be specific, the natural habits of some animals such as pandas, tigers, and so on are devastated by human activities. Since humans’ activities are a main culprit of losing biodiversity via destroying the environment of wild animals. Thus, humans just have one useful and realistic method to save their lives is that endangered animals are kept in cages called zoos. Furthermore, zoos have an elite mission that they assist people in broadening their horizon vis-a-vis wild lives. For instance, children have a favorable opportunity to learn and see marvelous terrestrial creatures except humans in their life and they may observe their activities that they never have had a chance to do before. Therefore,.zoos may have a role in saving wild animals’ lives as well as teaching our offspring about them.
On the other hand, although zoos have several benefits, wild animals are needed to live in their own environment. Without a doubt, wild animals’ habitats are the best place for animals in that they find it appropriate to live, regenerate and develop their species. For example, eagles have their own territory for them and their partners in the wilderness; however, when being kept in cages, they may live under plenty of stress that can kill them. To tackle environmental devastation, humans ought to have some prompt actions such as creating new friendly fuel or material not harmful to the environment or imposing new laws against poaching and animal smuggling. Above all, only when animals have a chance to live in their environment, will their species be well-developed.
To sum up, the maintenance of zoos may bring several visual benefits for humans; nevertheless, animals are akin to humans in that they need to live in their habitats where they feel like an oasis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06451612903 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77823328442 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534946236559 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7172492968 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.6 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9333333333 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304489604058 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132004283061 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893979640307 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224944855894 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112247110651 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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