Some people think technology makes life complex, so we should make life simpler without using technology. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons to your answer and provide examples from your knowledge. Write at least 250 words.
The question of the application of modern technologies in daily life has recently become highly debatable in the global community. It is argued that society ought to abandon utilizing machinery to simplify our life. I absolutely disagree with the statement and strongly believe that using technological instruments cannot complicate people's lifestyle.
To begin with, the majority of developed services allow people to optimize their everyday activities and to make room in their schedule. This is because the initial goal of implementing such tools was to automize algorithmic processes which had been carried out by people for a long time. Consequently, technology brought the world an opportunity to spend more time on valuable things. As a result, the current generation feels happier than the previous. For example, according to the New York Times, the life satisfaction level of contemporary society is higher in comparison with the preceding decades.
Further, the percentage of individuals that have already introduced technologies increases constantly. This is because more individuals are beginning to understand that being productive and competitive in the present world is becoming impossible without digital instruments. Moreover, people are willing to pay for such machinery because the beneficial effect of its use is worth every penny. For example, according to the Wall Street Journal, people spend almost 40% of their earnings on computer services per month.
In conclusion, I consider that the development of present-day technologies established the opportunity to abridge routine tasks from our everyday schedule that make the way we live simpler than it was previously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07685984615 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5383805667 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.153846154 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173119342611 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547003979476 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385743949951 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107920989476 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394692680911 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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