In some countries, schools are open till late so that children can be looked after when parents are at work. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
Over the past decades, people’s views differ on whether children should be taken care of during parents’ work time in some countries. Although this may bring some adverse effects, the role substitution of schools to keep an eye on children has plenty of benefits which outweigh the disadvantages in many aspects.
On the one hand, family nourishment plays an important part in education in schools, and this is not the academy’s responsibility. To begin with, if they take charge of keeping an eye on children later than usual, schools have to pay more for teachers’ extra hours to tutor the kids, which can significantly influence the economy of many institutions. In addition, parental guidance for children must be properly spent on developing offspring fully, however, there is an alarming problem: providing that schooltime is much longer than family time, it will adversely affect children's behavior. On the grounds that parents spend a great amount of time on their company, they may forget the duty to nurture the kids physically and mentally well. As a result, this poses a threat to the children who are suffering from lack of respect, care, and sympathy for their hardship in study.
On the other hand, parents will have more time to work if schools are capable of nourishing their sons and daughters till late. Given that moms and dads are breadwinners of the family, they have a perception that they should devote their hours facing up to numerous submissions at business with a view to making more money to pay families’ bills. Consequently, parents' daytime for dealing with huge workloads will be prolonged due to schools’ support of looking after children. Furthermore, most educational places nowadays are no longer poor-safety and insecure. In contrast, class environments now are familiar with children, so that they will be able to learn with their peers and tutors and play in a similar atmosphere like at home. Additionally, parents will not be in fear of kidnapping, as well as under the pressure of arriving on time in heavy traffic to pick up their child.
In conclusion, although some drawbacks including the bond between guardians and dependents, the positive impact of late-working institutions is undeniable in terms of financial ability and caring condition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1871657754 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88838870786 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601604278075 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0877131026 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.571428571 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3571428571 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247942966712 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808204583968 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612817655574 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142310426552 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512086037937 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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