People nowadays tend to take their family to another country when they work abroad. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modern world, there is a growing tendency that people choose to bring their families with them when working abroad. While there are conflicting views about moving a family to a new country, I am on the side that its benefits outweigh its difficulties.
To begin with, there are two main issues that people need to consider. The first one is the cost of moving to another country. This cost includes accommodation price, food, entertainment, and other compulsory costs such as insurance and fee. Clearly, the cost of a family moving overseas is much higher than that of the individual. Besides, the salary of one employee working abroad can handle the individual living costs, but it is more difficult to manage the living cost of all other members as they hardly get a well-paid job in a different place. Therefore, if people want to take their family overseas, they need to make sure their financial ability not only at that time but also in the future. Another problem is the social circle in their new homes. Because they go to work, they have their coworkers, partners, or clients, which is easier for them to build their social circle. However, their family members might not have a suitable community to make new friends. Therefore, if this family does not have acquaintances or relatives in the new country, they can be isolated for the first time.
However, it can not be denied that moving to a new country is a great opportunity for the family to share this experience. If the family has a strong financial foundation, they are encouraged to travel and broaden their horizons. They can consider it as a family trip with financial support, and it turns out that they can take a holiday at an economic price.
To sum up, although moving abroad with the family has certain difficulties, it is worth the price for sharing this experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: ECONOMIC_ECONOMICAL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economical' (=affordable, cheap)?
Suggestion: economical
... out that they can take a holiday at an economic price. To sum up, although moving a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79750778816 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60512889464 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520249221184 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5696913878 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.25 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319141088463 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103071192691 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055328824299 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185987841318 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506158974708 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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