While mobile phones have many advantages number of problems have also resulted from them or the ways in which they are used
Currently, cellular phone have some advantages but there are many problems. It takes more and more time from us and distract, however there are some solutions.
A problem why celllural phones have so many problems is that everyone uses and sits on phone a lot. As a result, there has been a serious declining of eyesight in most people, leading them to get a headache. Another problem could be a distract of us. When we work and do exercise, on mobile phones give a signal of message from friends. This means that modern life a mobile phone play main role.
A possible solution in order to not waste more time on our telephone we have to limit our time on using phone then do other deals and we can keep our eyesight. For example, my friend is economical person and he wastes approximately an hour in his phone and spends time on working and family. In addition, people should do to not distract them when they work or study, they do mute to not divert them.
To conclude, I think phones have many drawbacks and it has a little advantage
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, for example, i think, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47894736842 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40938262917 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5136071883 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3636363636 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34579710596 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129057815217 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948189533728 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219105505061 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682361456146 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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