The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that in order to lessen the increasing quantity of deadly accidents are to implement stricter punishments on driving offenses. I utterly concur with this view but I strongly disagree that this is the only solution owing to many ways such as installing surveillance cameras on the streets.
To begin with, it has been widely demonstrated that accidents will be significantly eliminated when conducting the policy of harsher punishments on drivers. People always desire to earn a great deal of money to nurture their families. For this reason, they are extremely afraid to face the police and have to endure heavy sanctions. A good example of this is my father, violating the laws and exceeding the speed limit and had to implement punishment by paying a fine and be confiscated his driving license. Until now, he experienced a valuable lesson and is an absolutely law-abiding citizen, ameliorating road safety.
On the other hand, it is obvious that there are a lot of measures that the governments or the authorities need to take into account such as installing surveillance cameras system on every street. It is straightforward that the installation of one can give rise to a profound effect in terms of traffic participants. As a result, they will be aware of obeying the laws. For instance, control through cameras in the Hanoi capital is extremely effective, the vehicle is in its right lane, resulting in enhancing road safety.
In conclusion, I completely agree that while a solution to increase road safety is to give heavier punishments on drivers, I am fully convinced that this is not the only way. Therefore, a radical solution to better that should combine all of the possible measures.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... solution to better that should combine all of the possible measures.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02456140351 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9824024763 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60701754386 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.548147019 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172492593695 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502800812628 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068489647923 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108189149386 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645127473488 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... solution to better that should combine all of the possible measures.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02456140351 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9824024763 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60701754386 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.548147019 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172492593695 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502800812628 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068489647923 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108189149386 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645127473488 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.