Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The rules against producing annoying sounds have always been one of the controverting debate between people who believe it and others with opposite opinion. This essay has evaluated both claims and tried to get a logical conclude.
Firstly, those who agree to define restrictive laws think it is necessary for having calm and suitable atmosphere to live. Certainly, majority of people prefer to have a quiet place as their house and loudly voices will be causes a lot of problem especially at night and other resting time. Secondly, silence for some places like schools and hospitals is obligatory. Producing uncontrollable and unacceptable sounds will lead to distraction of students and discomfort of patients. As a third reason, freely to make noises may be initiation to occur other criminal tasks such as looting and rioting. For instance, the younger people provoke to show aggressive behavior when they are in this condition.
By contrast, supporters of producing unlimited sounds often state that restrictions are unlike the human freedom and they should be able to do all the favorite activity. They also say, that make much noises are unavoidable in many events like parties. As a last point, it is also true that each person may be tempted to listen music with a loud voice and it is not permanent.
Overall, it is appear to me that stronger argument is in favor of rules and restriction to make noise, with all the reasons like human freedom and its interests. As a fact, the require to calm and silent places to education and so on is more important to personal desires.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
... house and loudly voices will be causes a lot of problem especially at night and other resting t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...rite activity. They also say, that make much noises are unavoidable in many events l...
^^^^
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appeared'.
Suggestion: appeared
...d it is not permanent. Overall, it is appear to me that stronger argument is in favo...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...n freedom and its interests. As a fact, the require to calm and silent places to education ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'calming'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: calming
...d its interests. As a fact, the require to calm and silent places to education and so o...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, third, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94382022472 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69924966312 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625468164794 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6627015264 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.538461538 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203542577903 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060569020132 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050468374561 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10092989984 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607376645693 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
... house and loudly voices will be causes a lot of problem especially at night and other resting t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...rite activity. They also say, that make much noises are unavoidable in many events l...
^^^^
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appeared'.
Suggestion: appeared
...d it is not permanent. Overall, it is appear to me that stronger argument is in favo...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...n freedom and its interests. As a fact, the require to calm and silent places to education ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'calming'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: calming
...d its interests. As a fact, the require to calm and silent places to education and so o...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, third, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94382022472 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69924966312 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625468164794 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6627015264 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.538461538 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203542577903 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060569020132 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050468374561 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10092989984 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607376645693 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.