Some think that children should start school as early as possible, while others believe that they should start school at the age of seven. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In several education systems around the world, children starts compulsory education at the age of 7. While a good few people are in favour of children starting to learn formally at school as soon as possible, I subscribe to the notion that formal education at school should start when children turn 7 years old.
On the one hand, formal learning should begin as soon as possible because early childhood is the best time for off-springs to assimilate knowledge. Scientifically speaking, human brains contain 15 billion brain cells at birth; however, this huge amount starts to decrease immediately after a child is born without growing back. That explains why children's acquisition ability are amazing, in both velocity and magnitude. Therefore, children should start learning as soon as possible, while the brain cells have not yet died out.
On the other hand, formal common education received earlier than 7 years old may negatively effect children's imagination. Common education in a class will, to some extent, force children to comply with a certain way of thinking and form a concept that there is only one answer to a question. For example, if a three year-old who never heard of a "circle" is asked what a circle looks like, he or she may give various answers such as the moon, the plates instead of a solid answer "circle". Being taught the definition of "circle" too early will prevent them from thinking before answering and gradually will blunt their immature imagination ability.
In conclusion, although starting school before 7 has particular benefits, I think that children should not attend school until the age of 7 to avoid grave effect to their young minds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1618705036 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95899770336 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625899280576 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.7002289072 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.454545455 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308751776639 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115721217493 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919587850265 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204389557146 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944354342451 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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