Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Whether advertisements motivate people to buy uneeded or necessary goods, is a controversial issue. I of the idea that ads help people ease their buying process.
Advertising has become increasingly significant in recent years, they therefore are overexploited by many sellers, who favor their own profits over customers' benefits. The first drawback of advertisement is that some firms make use of ads to provide mislead or exaggerate the account of their offerings to increase their sales. This can cause irritation and have detrimental impacts on consumers' health. Another effect of advertings abuse is that it manipulates their customers into impulsive buying behaviors. This is especially the case for the young, who are easily captivated by flashy and extravagant advertisements, which depicts their peer using advertised products and services.
However, if these wrongdoings noticed by consumer watchdogs, the companies, which advertise such products will receive severe punishments. On the other hand, advertising help businesses to acknowledge the customers components of their products, thereby facilitating their selling products and turning their buyers into wise customers. The basic function of adverts is to disseminate the relevant information about the ingredient, material, use of the goods, which is helpful for people select things that meet their demand. Moreover, with provision of products and services data, customers are able to make comparisions, study the composition, and consult their accquaintances abouth these things. By doing so, customer can gain the needed knowledge, which help them filter out and categorize low-quality, undesired characteristics of a particular product and become more intelligent.
In sum, even though there are manufaturers that utilize advertising sell products with no redeeming features, the majority of advertisements supply clients with sufficient and informative description about merchandises. I concur with the view that advertising brings more goods than harms to people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 387, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consumers'' or 'consumer's'?
Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
...itation and have detrimental impacts on consumers health. Another effect of advertings ab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78678678679 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16145624933 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633633633634 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.072935494 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.352941176 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414660461767 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147851189534 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176041336123 0.0667982634062 264% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294256597846 0.151304729494 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.328639382185 0.056905535591 578% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.