The maps show changes in the local industrial village in England called Stamdorf between 1985 and 2015.
The map illustrates a significant change in a domestic village of England called Stamdorf over a period of three decades. Overall, the village had developed quite prosperously and the development was almost close to a suburb.
To start with, there were few roadside inns connected to Arlington Road in 1985, which were later shifted from the north-west part of the village to its south-east region and a road was extended from the earlier point in order to facilitate an industry with its staff quarters nearby the village, which was at the south-east area of the village near the roadside in 1985.
An upsurge in residential estates can be seen in 2015, growing from almost none to two estates over the period. It is also evident that, due to the rise in housing facilities and therefore population, the field was expanded and shifted from its previous roadside location to the riverside area. Moreover, the main bridge along the Arlington Road was renovated and built much stronger with the new steel structure compared to the wooden bridge in 1985
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9604519774 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61897163341 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604519774011 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.2431870414 43.030603864 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.333333333 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17616789369 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873338988112 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107213369854 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125292758848 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086176541386 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.