In modern times, some species of animals are slowly disappearing. Do you think that it is acceptable for species to become extinct? What are the possible reasons and consequences of this extinction? Provise reasons and examples to explain your opinion?
In the modern era, more and more animals have been barely existing and appear to be their natural evolution. I personally agree with this view for several reasons; however there are harmful effects which will be deliberated in forthcoming paragraph.
To begin with, several animal species become disapppearing because of deforestation that causes them to completely lose their natural range. This is also highly caused by soil erosion which might reduce leaf canopies and then, such animals barely find their food sources. In addition, the climate change is driving extinctions damaging the ecosystem of animal population. For instance, temperature in the south pole continues to rise at three times in which this inflicts loss of sea ice, as a consequence, native animals (penguins) hardly survive for natural breeding.
Turning to the grave consequences, the animal extinction will highly weaken biodiversity and can prompt cascading effects through food chain that shows the intricate relationship in ecosystem. Should the predators go terminated, the prey will extremely proliferate. In addition, the loss of various species could be detrimental to the environment which leads to the ecological imbalance. The forest could probably be destroyed by increasing many animals, herbivorous ones, which arouse predators extinction, consequently, the other animals will lack access in enough nutritious food stock to stay alive.
In conclusion, in my viewpoint, the destructive human activities and drastically climatic fluctuations in this century are possible causes why endangered species seem reasonable to die out. Following that, the disastrous impacts are the disruption of animal food cycle and ecological balance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ight reduce leaf canopies and then, such animals barely find their food sources. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, so, then, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69649805447 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96578724077 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653696498054 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7054535117 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179077154933 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599044323138 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372766838587 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102381221686 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040232242651 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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