Many people believe that living a city life offers greater benefits as compared to the
countryside? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Overwhelming majority reckon that the city provides more benefits than the village to live in. Despite the village has high level of nature quality, I strongly believe that city gives the pivotal facilities which cannot be found in the village easily, and it will support the quality of human live.
On the one hand, village is identical with nature preservation. In addition, by living in the village, we are supplied with good air quality since there are no industrial and transportation activities. To illustrate, the plethora of villages in Indonesia is filled by farmers who do not require to do their work with activities which emerge pollution. As a result, the quality of nature is still preserved for human. another benefit to live in the village, people in the village are less competitive. This is because they do not have high expectations compared to the city where most of people compete to be the best. Thus, villagers still have the higher empathy to care about each other compared to people who live in the city.
On the other hand, the city is completed with paramount facilities. The health care and educational facilities are two aspects which have ability to support people’s necessities. For instance, Jakarta as capital city of Indonesia is provided with numerous health care facilities such as hospitals, clinics, personal health care, as well as kind of courses from elementary school to the university levels. Consequently, these achievable facilities will encourage people have good health and education quality. Secondly, the other additional facilities are more founded in the city because majority of people who live in the city need those facilities to improve their standard of living. For example, the modern market to serve groceries, sport center to maintain health life, and theme parks to entertain society.
To conclude, in my perspective, although air quality in the village is still maintained, the city is more able to fulfill human necessities based on the facilities which can be found easily and completely. This is as long as air quality in the city is still preserved by society and the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...is filled by farmers who do not require to do their work with activities which emerge...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...of nature is still preserved for human. another benefit to live in the village, people ...
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...expectations compared to the city where most of people compete to be the best. Thus, villagers...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ompared to people who live in the city. On the other hand, the city is completed...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ievable facilities will encourage people have good health and education quality. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, of course, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14245014245 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78574210723 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507122507123 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.431158659 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.176470588 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17336470672 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622585670362 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468678973993 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105880109176 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447167874019 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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