Individuals should not be allowed to carry guns as it increases crime and violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is agrued that citizens should not be allowed to carry guns since crime and violence in society will be growed significantly. From my point of view, i mostly agree with this statement because of its drawbacks for the individual. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the international world and with the appearance of modern technology more individuals have become unemployment and crime, so allowed to carry guns is hugely dangerous for the individuals life. Not only can the government not control their nation and more chaos will happen, but also risk gangsters will appear, affecting harmful influence for the people life and economic development. Furthermore, demerits affection will be led by this problem to the teenager's behavier and their action which reduce their nation's development. To illustrate, there was a surveys by Kevin, the famous scientist and professor which was about the people's satisfied in the nation which allowed their citizens to carry weapons. The statistic showed that nearly everyone has felt very uncomfortable and dangerous.
However, we can not negate the positive aspect of guns in the people life. The adolesence, young generation and their family can be protected by the weapons for the bad citizens. Moreover, people will not depend too much on the government's supported, many strength influence will be lead by this action.
To conlude, by my agrument from the essay that i totally agree with this statement, but it still have some advantage for the individuals. The state need to have clear plans to improve the people's required and the development of ther country.
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...will analyse this statement in detail. First of all, in the international world...
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...come unemployment and crime, so allowed to carry guns is hugely dangerous for the indivi...
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... carry guns is hugely dangerous for the individuals life. Not only can the government not c...
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...elt very uncomfortable and dangerous. However, we can not negate the positive ...
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... too much on the governments supported, many strength influence will be lead by this action. ...
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...nfluence will be lead by this action. To conlude, by my agrument from the essa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1872659176 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78219934535 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576779026217 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7888964878 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.538461538 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177514169958 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639836358992 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103289460605 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108572654773 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823349429781 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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