Housing shortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences Some people think only government action can solve this problem To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Housing shortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people think only government
action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this cutting - edge competitive era ,every individual have dream to live in urban area which leads to paucity of residence and arise many repercussion related to society. It is belived by few individual that anthorities can overcome the problem of housing shortage in metropolitan city. In my opinion, an amalgamation of both government as well as individuals is required to tackle this issue.

First of all,the reason why it is suggested
that government should figure out the problem because authorities has resources, power
and responsibility to intervene and implement policies. In Other words,if government restrict allocation of land and focus on vertical housing which hep in even distribution of shelter. for intance, in many developed countries such as in singapore governmen buit vestical houses in small place . moreover, another reason why leaders overcome problem easily is that, they can apply extra taxes in banglows and laage house. So It is less prachased by peoples. Theorfore, canadian government restrict people to buy house for the two year of period to overcome problem.
In contrast, other people can problems help to solve this problems through moving from
cities to suburban and outskirts of towns which provide opportunity to open own business in agriculture such as farming business. Additionally, it also foster individuals health and stress-free life For example,, article published in “The-Times" Stated that people’s who works as a farmer will get average 27% higher income than job employees.Hence,government Should encourage people through campaign and
Video graphy to move towards Village.

In recapitulation, although People move to metropolitan cities in search of job oppostunitiess they face residencial issue. I deem that it is not only responsibility
of leaders but also society to overcome this issue by motivating people to live in vertical houses and in Villages.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
In this cutting - edge competitive era ,every individual have dream to live in ...
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Suggestion:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'dreamed', 'dreamt'.
Suggestion: dreamed; dreamt
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Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ion, an amalgamation of both government as well as individuals is required to tackle this ...
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...e and implement policies. In Other words,if government restrict allocation of land ...
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...other people can problems help to solve this problems through moving from cities t...
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Suggestion:
... solve this problems through moving from cities to suburban and outskirts of town...
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Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fosters'?
Suggestion: fosters
...farming business. Additionally, it also foster individuals health and stress-free life...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... business. Additionally, it also foster individuals health and stress-free life For example...
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... health and stress-free life For example,, article published in “The-Times' S...
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Suggestion: Hence
...ge 27% higher income than job employees.Hence,government Should encourage people thro...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , government
...% higher income than job employees.Hence,government Should encourage people through campaig...
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Line 11, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng people to live in vertical houses and in Villages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in contrast, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55254237288 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31786363734 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630508474576 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7353689392 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224259736873 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749101997345 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531578896872 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866435274409 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669410302955 0.056905535591 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
In this cutting - edge competitive era ,every individual have dream to live in ...
^^
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e competitive era ,every individual have dream to live in urban area which leads ...
^^
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'dreamed', 'dreamt'.
Suggestion: dreamed; dreamt
...competitive era ,every individual have dream to live in urban area which leads to pa...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ion, an amalgamation of both government as well as individuals is required to tackle this ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ed to tackle this issue. First of all,the reason why it is suggested that govern...
^^^^
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...e and implement policies. In Other words,if government restrict allocation of land ...
^^^
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ch hep in even distribution of shelter. for intance, in many developed countries su...
^^^
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nmen buit vestical houses in small place . moreover, another reason why leaders ov...
^^
Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...n buit vestical houses in small place . moreover, another reason why leaders overcome pr...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 54, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...other people can problems help to solve this problems through moving from cities t...
^^^^
Line 6, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... solve this problems through moving from cities to suburban and outskirts of town...
^^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fosters'?
Suggestion: fosters
...farming business. Additionally, it also foster individuals health and stress-free life...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... business. Additionally, it also foster individuals health and stress-free life For example...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive commas
Suggestion: ,
... health and stress-free life For example,, article published in “The-Times' S...
^^
Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: '”' seems to be missing
...life For example,, article published in “The-Times' Stated that people’s who...
^
Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...ge 27% higher income than job employees.Hence,government Should encourage people thro...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , government
...% higher income than job employees.Hence,government Should encourage people through campaig...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng people to live in vertical houses and in Villages.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in contrast, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55254237288 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31786363734 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630508474576 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7353689392 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224259736873 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749101997345 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531578896872 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866435274409 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669410302955 0.056905535591 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.