In the future, it is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people in some countries. Is this positive or negative development?
These days, other countries tend to have a high proportion of older people and this problem will continue in the future. In this statement, I will discuss and explain my views below.
On the one hand, this problem has some beneficial impacts. Firstly, older people have more experience than the younger generation. Because they live longer and have their own knowledge, they will play a big role in contributing free labor to ameliorating communities. According to a recent survey, most of the younger generation learn a lot from older people and admire seniors. Secondly, old people still contribute to charity activities. If they cannot return to work for some reasons, they still engage in charity work and instill a great sense of responsibility and altruism into the young generation.
On the other hand, there are several negative reasons. It is expected that senior citizens will become a burden to their families and government in the future. Old people have a longer life expectancy than before, and their descendants will shoulder much more responsibilities. For instance, if the government has to pay for increased retirement pensions and health care costs, it will bear a greater financial burden for both the younger generation and the government. In addition, older people can replace young people. They cannot catch up with technology development and will stagnate. In the factory, there is always a lot of cutting-edge technology and it will take time and effort to guide senior citizens through the use of it.
To sum up, this trend has both positive and negative impacts. Even though the older generation can be a source of knowledge for the younger generation, they are still a burden on society.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for instance, in addition, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13120567376 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8341409655 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2085802986 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30324268569 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955779399729 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568178516145 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185098842055 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489978659827 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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