Team activities can teach more skills for life than those activities which are played alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Team activities are a controversial topic of debate. Some people believe that group activities can help them learn more life skills, whereas others group of people do not. With me, I opine for both views, and I will my view in this essay.
On the one hand, playing or working in a group can raise the individual solidarity and awareness of each team member. It helps team members interact with and support each other to increase team performance. Teamwork can also learn and share knowledge with each other so that they can help each other improve. For instance, in one class, there are different groups, and those groups will have a different task: the task of the leader is to divide the work among the members according to their ability, and there will be a certain deadline to submit.
On the other hand, teamwork can be a cause of division, as team members may dislike a member in the group or may be hostile for some reason. Moreover, sometimes, the leader favors an individual. In other words, group members disagree with each other, but no one is willing to accept other opinions, causing controversy. For example, the leader of the team may have a special affection for a member of the group, which can make the other members of that group feel unfair. Thus, there is a significant argument.
In conclusion, in my opinion, Team work is very good but everyone should avoid unnecessary problems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75918367347 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50747819475 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538775510204 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9910074448 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6923076923 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170182326894 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666712025323 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542134287638 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107447528472 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630434499773 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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