Some say that in today’s world the value of humanities has been eclipsed by the necessity of preparing for specific wealth-producing careers, such as medicine. Discuss whether you think there is a role in today’s changing world for study of the humanities.
Most of the governments, as well as businesses are overwhelmed by the commercialization in 21st century. It is strongly agreed that, more prominence is given to producing wealth, rather than studying humanities. The reasons for this tragic circumstances are, governments encourage businessmen to generate more wealth to the nation and businessmen, on the other hand, make efforts to multiply their revenues.
To begin with, nowadays, most of the governments are promoting campaigns that generate more wealth to their nations. They never genuinely invest their money in raising awareness about public health, supporting under-privileged citizens or even other poor countries, unless they have some gain from it. For instance, countries like USA, which worship capitalism as their Holy Grail, are only interested in becoming wealthy; furthermore, they consider their military power as their biggest strength.
Moreover, private businessmen are focused in making their revenues graphs to skyrocket. Of course, they conduct events to meet their cooperate social responsibility criterion; however that is merely a source of marketing for them. For example, companies take their companies worker to a beach cleaning campaign and most people participate just to take a picture and post it in social media. No one is actually putting their heart to it.
In conclusion, governments or businessmen have no genuine interest in investing in studying the humanities. Unfortunately, they are interested in creating careers that generate wealth. Hence, it the social obligation of governments, as well as millionaire to promote studying humanities, to make the world a better place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6812749004 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14476665408 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617529880478 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9297940184 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.692307692 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.25397266985 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0947789227583 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355755876701 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271353285542 0.071462118173 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634211310908 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024050547256 0.0609392437508 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.