Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that the governments should be responsible to perform and limit the scientific research in comparison with private sector. I completely agree with this opinion because the possibility of contribution more people and companies and considering the public benefits under governments control.
The main reason why I believe is because administration is able to provide the fair situation to contribute numerous appropriate people and companies to reach a common goals. Indeed, there is no difference and priority for the government to select the suitable people to perform projects except the required academic qualifications in comparison with independent companies. To illustrate, the family relationship can be dominated the researches instead of essential factors, because they prefer to held profits between themselves in such organizations.
Another reason why I support the notion that governments is due to the fact that the vital resources to conduct the scientific projects such as financial issues, laboratory equipment, and university network are more likely controlled by governments. Which can lead to unlimited access of sophistication facilities to reach the goals in spite of economic obstacles. For instance, in our country some high-tech microscope for microstructural evaluation of materials are only available in government centers, so will be ready to use if the research be under administration rules.
In conclusion, I totally agree with this opinion to carry the academic evaluation by governments because it will be more convenient in both terms of people contribution and access to necessary equipment in this case. The administration will be able to design a sophisticated algorithm to select the right private companies to goals accomplishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'goal'?
Suggestion: goal
... people and companies to reach a common goals. Indeed, there is no difference and pri...
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Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... more likely controlled by governments. Which can lead to unlimited access of sophist...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73782771536 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35692948664 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550561797753 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.8172073355 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.2 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234011119302 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918095569055 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656113484552 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153444737234 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703810798799 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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