Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Wilderness area gives many benefits not only to the wildlife, but also to us. Wilderness area is a place where animals can live freely without human intervention and an oxygen supplier for the world. Considering how crucial wilderness area is to the world, it is highly recommended for the nation to pass laws that protect the wilderness area from economic gain purpose.
From the news, we can clearly see that the destruction human cause to this world is already beyond repair. Ozone hole in the atmosphere, countless plastic residue floating in the vast ocean, and many other instances of environment damage caused by human. At the moment, these damages only cause harm to the wildlife, but not so much to us, humans. Yet, as the time goes on, these harms will surely come to human; and when we realize it, it will be too late. By keeping our hands off a natural state, we have stopped ourselves from deteriorating our earth furthermore.
For those who oppose my views, they might argue that economic gain is also important to our lives thus it's okay to sacrifice several wilderness area for economic purpose. It is true that economic gain is important for a nation. However, a comfortable and healthy living environment is also important for the nation itself. If a nation has an excellent economic growth yet a poor living condition, it will not be an ideal nation for everyone.
In conclusion, protecting a wilderness areas is not only important for the wildlife, but also benefits for us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: IT_IS[8]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ain is also important to our lives thus its okay to sacrifice several wilderness ar...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'in conclusion', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233449477352 0.240241500013 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.114982578397 0.157235817809 73% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104529616725 0.0880659088768 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0801393728223 0.0497285424764 161% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0662020905923 0.0444667217837 149% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0975609756098 0.12292977631 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0278745644599 0.0406280797675 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65491694491 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0348432055749 0.030933414821 113% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0975609756098 0.0997080785238 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0209059233449 0.0249443105267 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0174216027875 0.0148568991511 117% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1501.0 2732.02544248 55% => OK
No of words: 256.0 452.878318584 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86328125 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.58838876751 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3359375 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25 0.280924506359 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171875 0.200843997647 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125 0.132149295362 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65491694491 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 219.290929204 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.48968727796 116% => OK
Word variations: 57.4833439273 55.4138127331 104% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6194690265 63% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6923076923 23.380412469 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8236635561 59.4972553346 53% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.461538462 141.124799967 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 23.380412469 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.692307692308 0.674092028746 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 44.6923076923 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.37333333333 1.64882698954 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199772611985 0.391690518653 51% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.146480685855 0.123202303941 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0930633548127 0.077325440228 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.582320479535 0.547984918172 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166051363842 0.149214159877 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081737620754 0.161403998019 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477749729701 0.0892212321368 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.243035242951 0.385218514788 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0822395257928 0.0692045440612 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137429102669 0.275328986314 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286490000424 0.0653680567796 44% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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