some people belive in that increase in the violance in the media in our socity.
The issue opinien that people believe that increacing violence in the media is the case of the increasing violeance in our scoiety. I agree with this isuue and we discuss about my own position in this topic. The increasing violance in our society, especially among the children.
The first think in this topic is people show the some news in media in he inspierd of this topic and he admired to this topic and some other effect of the news is good and bed habit to the people. As like that the social media is so good to the some think but some people is not to yet use to the good perpose adn some bed habit of thyis the social media.so as far the author said to the increasing to the violance in our socity.
the second lliogical think is incrasing violence in the media is good as well as so useful to the people.
Some time some accient or eatheqeck to the some country so we have go there and save to some people and this time media is good use to this perpose.
Third think of this issue is the other belive that childdren's peer groups and parental role model powerful influnce on children's behevior. This time some people is as marvelus group to the friends and we get eassley take some good habit in there in your own.
This issue we have concuison that the author said is ture but is not much so far in this to the realy life.
So incresing media violance is good and peer of grouds so far..
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'well', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244604316547 0.240241500013 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.129496402878 0.157235817809 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104316546763 0.0880659088768 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0503597122302 0.0497285424764 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0431654676259 0.0444667217837 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129496402878 0.12292977631 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0251798561151 0.0406280797675 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.11514677857 2.79330140395 76% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0467625899281 0.030933414821 151% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.169064748201 0.0997080785238 170% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0249443105267 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0148568991511 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1420.0 2732.02544248 52% => OK
No of words: 267.0 452.878318584 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31835205993 6.0361032391 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.58838876751 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.217228464419 0.366273622748 59% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.157303370787 0.280924506359 56% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.112359550562 0.200843997647 56% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0561797752809 0.132149295362 43% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.11514677857 2.79330140395 76% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 219.290929204 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415730337079 0.48968727796 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.2921821473 55.4138127331 69% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6194690265 53% => OK
Sentence length: 24.2727272727 23.380412469 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1847587761 59.4972553346 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.090909091 141.124799967 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 23.380412469 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.727272727273 0.674092028746 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 40.0030643514 51.4728631049 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.79032258065 1.64882698954 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465599364612 0.391690518653 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.168389254626 0.123202303941 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.139803129708 0.077325440228 181% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.800369767355 0.547984918172 146% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.194101892337 0.149214159877 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.257436522768 0.161403998019 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14412929509 0.0892212321368 162% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.340985536183 0.385218514788 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.144833081471 0.0692045440612 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275386622568 0.275328986314 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156279154201 0.0653680567796 239% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.