The pie graphs below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
pie comparison
The pie graphs compare the changes of five different energy productions between 1995 and 2005.
Initially, the majority of energy productions in France were gas and coal, which took more than half of production of energy. While the rest of energy sources generated the least amount of energy in France and which producing proportion increased relatively except for Petro, which showed the declined in its production.
About similar rates of energy were produced by Gas and Coal in both years, with the slight amount of coal was produced. Energy produced by coal comprised of 29.80% in 1995 and this increased a slightly by about just 1% to 30.93% in 2005. Similarly, 29.63% of gas was generated in 1995 and which rose to 30.31% by 2005.
With the remaining energy sources, there was an approximately grow of 5% in nuclear and other from 6.40% and 4.90%, respectively in 1995, to reach at 10.10% and 9.10% in 2005. In contrast to this, the petrol was the only energy sources that decreased in its production from 29.27% in 1995 to 19.55% in 2005.
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'similarly', 'so', 'while', 'except for', 'in contrast', 'in contrast to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253588516746 0.268076937826 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.11004784689 0.116061578633 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0382775119617 0.0759168565197 50% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0382775119617 0.0366838410393 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00956937799043 0.0131127313244 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.191387559809 0.155750635184 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0382775119617 0.0379272487307 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.52695957454 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0239234449761 0.0210936926555 113% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0717703349282 0.0948980150116 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0239234449761 0.00967000014798 247% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1055.0 1161.00487805 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.9 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.86111111111 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35 0.337110787985 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2 0.247514529752 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155555555556 0.171178102325 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116666666667 0.112407865282 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52695957454 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.546246751206 98% => OK
Word variations: 45.446228676 49.3433353143 92% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5 23.0094962315 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7768692733 42.9750493124 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.875 135.714022679 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 23.0094962315 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.689975730869 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 42.5 47.7609492067 89% => OK
Elegance: 3.06060606061 2.94281807926 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388355115473 0.418131533498 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.265079440542 0.181151798455 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0768212337503 0.0850326197045 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.801564143913 0.706616315825 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.100672065957 0.157042692854 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227643494595 0.228904883108 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104507695674 0.108899403657 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.3527796218 0.367819155151 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0313695447361 0.0812612215331 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291228484698 0.316326947829 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947425403639 0.0921553760075 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.16585365854 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.