People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
The term behaviour is quite difficult to describes because it has plethora of meaning. But in general behavior is the how persons act or react in the external or internal forces. Human beings is the most intelligents species,have number of choice they think,decide and excute things.
I partially agree with the above statements people behvaoiurs is largely determined by their external force not by their own making. Because differnts peoples have different behvaiours it affects their perception wheather to modify themselves as results of external force or excute actions depends on their own feelings.
Many exernal force like social,moral,family contributions to their thinking,further it will be very unwarranted to say that external force only responsible for the peoples behaviours.for examples stealing activity in our context is strictily prohibited in our society but there is no evidences that due to this rule peoples stop to these unruly activites.however some peoples argue that stealing activities results from the poverty,but still it will be unjustified that only poor people perform such activities.this activity is results of their own thinking.
We as a human beings we learn,think,decides,heras absorbs different things from our external environments for examples in some country there may be punishments of throwing garbage In the road at that conditions peoples will decide based on this rule wheather to throw or not..we can see that here here both external and internal force play a vital role.similarly,in the country where such rule are not available people will decides what he wants.
Anothers examples is that students are frequently told to study hard for getting higher marks in the exam,some of may do hard work due to external force while other may not .studying hard for getting higher marks is due to influence from other while not doing hard practice is result of their ownthinking more likely internal force.in addition to these,when we are child we don’t know anything afterwards we learn many things form the society,how to behaves morally in the society?how to be successful person? All these are depends on the external force while internal force will help them to wheather to accept the social,moral influence of others or behaves like their own feelings.
conclusively,examples aptly concludes that peoples behavious have equally contributed by the both factors.but external force will play littebit major role in shaping person behavior.the socioeconomic factors will always hav a significant bearing on the behaviours and thinking of human beings.we grow in the society and all positives and negatives of society are inside us varying in only degree.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'similarly', 'so', 'still', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in general']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221030042918 0.240241500013 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.171673819742 0.157235817809 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.137339055794 0.0880659088768 156% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0600858369099 0.0497285424764 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0557939914163 0.0444667217837 125% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.118025751073 0.12292977631 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0343347639485 0.0406280797675 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.27201769146 2.79330140395 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0321888412017 0.030933414821 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0708154506438 0.0997080785238 71% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0236051502146 0.0249443105267 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0150214592275 0.0148568991511 101% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2716.0 2732.02544248 99% => OK
No of words: 420.0 452.878318584 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.46666666667 6.0361032391 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4 0.366273622748 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.342857142857 0.280924506359 122% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.235714285714 0.200843997647 117% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152380952381 0.132149295362 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27201769146 2.79330140395 117% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 219.290929204 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52619047619 0.48968727796 107% => OK
Word variations: 59.790856989 55.4138127331 108% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6194690265 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 42.0 23.380412469 180% => OK
Sentence length SD: 178.546044482 59.4972553346 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 271.6 141.124799967 192% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.0 23.380412469 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 0.674092028746 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.21349557522 422% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 76.2857142857 51.4728631049 148% => OK
Elegance: 1.29850746269 1.64882698954 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224940412598 0.391690518653 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.156273034417 0.123202303941 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0879999642934 0.077325440228 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.759544908511 0.547984918172 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.189913180337 0.149214159877 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124002087433 0.161403998019 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11586914778 0.0892212321368 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.228645651279 0.385218514788 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0427715706359 0.0692045440612 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140588466082 0.275328986314 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10683103875 0.0653680567796 163% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 13.5995575221 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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