Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life.
It is true that having children later is chosen by more and more parents recently. There are many reasons for this and it absolutely affects to society and family life in some aspects.
One reason is that they want to build up strong finance before having children. If a child is born in a good condition, he will grow up and develop his ability well. Furthermore, careful preparation for some skills of teaching children or taking care of them makes couple choose to have children later. All of parents also prefer their children to be polite and obedient, so they want to learn many ways to teach them. For example, people can learn experience of training their son by searching on the Internet or asking advice from old people.
Therefore, having the son later affects to society and family life in some positive aspects. Firstly, family quality life is better because people have enough money to start a good life and they do not have to worry about finance. Secondly, children generation becomes more and more developed and smart, so that is one of remarkable agencies in developing society and country.
In conclusion, there are some known reasons for this trend and they impact significantly not only on family but also on society. Thus, this trend should be done logically to build a growing community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 450, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...ach them. For example, people can learn experience of training their son by searching on t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46230244554 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9198715888 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337444394232 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118373797728 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118414467515 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20918094402 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137739622435 0.056905535591 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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