The past 100 years witnessed numerous important inventions, such as computers. What do you think is the most important invention among them? Please explain.
There is no denying the fact that nowadays there is numerous latest technological invention can be seen around us. While some individuals believe that computers are the most important thing among them, others advocate that. In my idea, there are a lot of vital findings better than computers. This essay will elaborate my idea and it will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad things to consider as essential technological instruments and we can obtain huge benefits from them. Few conspicuous things are computer related device, not only them but also medical instruments, space exploring instruments and so on. For example, at the moment we can find any disease inside our body through scan machines and like. It should also be emphasized that it will have far reaching positive impact on society.
Further more, Latest inventions are essential factors in the current society. We can consider robots as a noticeable invention among them. Actually, robots are playing a huge role in vehicles, machines, and like things. Also, smart phones and smart invention are playing a great role as well.Therefore we can see there are a number of latest finding we can see and we can use.
In conclusion, early 100 years Computers played a very important role in the technological field. However, at the moment there are lot of high technological invention than that. But we should remember they all are processing through a computer. Hence Computers are doing big support to the technology
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10483870968 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80207992839 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592741935484 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2242692554 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.125 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135711704919 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475218187274 0.0925447433944 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546511062193 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861606061824 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455700676854 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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