Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?
In the present age, education stood out of all priorities for people. However, leisure activities are very lucrative to children not only physically but also mentally. Throughout history, it is obvious from this that parents try to guaranties their children’s future. This argument will be proven by looking at how children’s leisure activities have sparked a heated debate. It is agreed that both parents and schools can do a lot to remedy this situation.
For one, it has been proven that, schools also should include regular exercise in student’s table times, with activities such as football competition. For instance, when I was in high school, before final exams, school manager executed football matches between classes. An instance illustrating this in action makes an excitement and enjoyable feelings among students. Besides educational subject that is a beneficial activity to improve student’s sense of leadership, responsibilities and experience of new things.
In addition to this, having healthy body cause to students concentrated well on their studies. An important point is that the student's practical knowledge will be increased with some extra-curricular activities. As an example, many famous scientists like Einstein were always engaged with extra activities rather than studding. As this show, students need to entertainment curriculum as much as studding.
In conclusion, clearly if children work hard at school and home, they will increase their opportunities for going higher education and getting a good job, but some people, including me believe that we should not mix studding with leisure activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'guaranty'.
Suggestion: guaranty
...s obvious from this that parents try to guaranties their children's future. This argu...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... mix studding with leisure activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, so, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65863453815 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15640168017 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694779116466 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7565155498 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169474664846 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554530215274 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522964399639 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101425408241 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580624314421 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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