Extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. Agree or disagree?
Extreme sports have become popular in the last few decades.A few years ago, people prefer sports as a part of their exercise and now the trend was changed. There are many reasons when people attracted to extreme sports activities. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of extreme sports before giving an appropriate conclusion.
To begin with, today's generation is very much conscious about their life and they are ready to do any works for their personal needs and also get a name and fame in the society, therefore, they choose adventurous activities. Firstly, adventurous sports activity helps to develop self-confidence and independent nature it will help to overcome any harsh incidents happen in their life. Secondly, it is a good method to make money. For example, Bear Grylls, a famous television presenter and adventurer, he makes a huge amount of money by doing dangerous activities.
However, Extreme sports has many disadvantageous. People get attracted to extreme sports activities because of their lack of knowledge. It has full of excitement and thrill. This thrill and adventurous nature of extreme sports can cause lifetime injury or death. For example, every year more than thousands of people killed or injured by sports like boxing or motor racing.
In conclusion, extreme sports have both merits and demerits. The government should educate people about the negative and positive side of sports and people should do dangerous activities under proper training and guidance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
... become popular in the last few decades.A few years ago, people prefer sports as ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30962343096 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74200033761 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610878661088 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.6123676001 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6428571429 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184574923507 0.242375264174 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743416953537 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537168950301 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127781940163 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651623379991 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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