Many young people get married before finishing their study and establishing a good job. To what extant do you agree? Please explain.
These days, there is a controversial debate between a member of society about the marriage in the college. There are a plethora of people who agree with the early marriage, while other have an opponent view. I am inclined with the early marriage during the study and it is not considered detrimental.
On one hand, The marriage in college have a myriad of benefits for the students. First of all, the early marriage will provide the self -esteem, self confidence and the stability in the life. Couples who are decided to take this decision by marriage early, will achieve their dreams and will feel the accomplishment of their future tasks. For instance, the students who were married in their early twenties , are more competent than their colleagues.
In addition, the early marriage is so beneficial to the couples because helping them to take the accurate decision in their life. It will help them to face the challenges in the life and take part in the construction of the society. This will enhance the research which was published in Sydney university about the early marriage during the study which proved that couples who were married early during the study and early ages, the divorce rate was relatively low.
To recapitulate, the foregoing discussion propounded the view that the marriage in early age is pivotal and have many benefits for couples which will help them to build their future and take positive in the communities to achieve better future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95951417004 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58444465763 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497975708502 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5665261304 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.363636364 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0847256992006 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357617163623 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031368963088 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.05685619919 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00803809812953 0.0609392437508 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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