Online shopping is destroying local business. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping with regards to this statement.
The Internet is transforming the lives around the world redefining the ways things are done. With these prevailing transformations, shopping is now done online, which is destructing the local business around. This essay will discuss, how online shopping is indeed overtaking the local business around.
Online companies are able to provide offers and discount to the customers to allure them to buy online. These companies are able to provide those discounts because they tend to save in bulk buying and multiple costs. For example costs or rent of shop, electricity, shop maintenance, etc.
This opportunity gives the chance to online business blossom.
Online shopping also provides the ultimate level of comfort to their customers allowing them to choose online business over local ones.
Customers can sit in the comfort of their homes and can order anything and everything they need, which will later be delivered to their homes. For instance, companies like Amazon can offer wide of options to their customer and deliver the product in the matter of just hours.
Local business is not able to provide the services, online giants can.
This essay discussed, how online companies are on a boom with all the comfort and discount they can offer. In my opinion, if the local business does not drive any change in the way they do business, there is a great chance that Online business will perish the local business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14163090129 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53750805247 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55364806867 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0783985473 50.4703680194 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.1538461538 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.12807881773 170% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298868868478 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1217978186 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976560730871 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162097060045 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0801944811262 0.0609392437508 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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