In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why?
Recently, the phenomenon of new inventions such as medicines, transportation and the computer and its corresponding advancements has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the new progressions are highly rewarding, such issue is regarded thoroughly both positive and constructive by many individuals. I profoundly inclined to believe that among all those inventions, the computer is considered as the most revolutionary one, and this idea will examine through this essay by providing some academic evidence before concluding.
On the one hand, from a technological standpoint, the invention of the computer had affected all other parts of human science by its beneficiary aspects. Firstly, it has some invaluable impacts on the improvement of medical science. Secondly, it makes our world like a small village according to new telecommunication technology. Finally, pursuant to an academic survey conducted by MIT University in 2016, not only computer make many activities much easier than before, such as banking job and so much other time-consuming jobs, but it also leads to gravitate children to learning new studies interestingly.
On the other hands, opponents argued that new technology has brought many detrimental side effects with itself. Moreover, they use a valid logic to support their idea about negative consequences of computer invention such as the advancement in mass destruction weapons. Not to mention that spending too much time on the computer could lead to lack of eyesight, depression and many other hazardous diseases. According to an academic research run by Tehran University, 38% of school students are now suffering from obesity due to their irregular use of computer games.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that the computer is the most wonderful invention of all times and it is the government responsibility to raise the public awareness about how people could benefit from it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1207.87684729 136% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49498327759 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19905216329 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625418060201 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 379.143842365 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3015530314 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.916666667 104.977214359 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0943003452014 0.242375264174 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352139204361 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270737739055 0.071462118173 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607751893406 0.151781067708 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204436764492 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 55.0591133005 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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