It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. Some people believe that the year off is a waste of time while others believe that it is necessary.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
These days, there is an ongoing debate among people that it is very important to take a break between school and university. It is possible to claim that having a one year break can be beneficial for some, in my view it is more important for the students to continue their academic studies. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument.
There are several reasons why the students must avoid taking a one year break right after finishing school. One of them could be that the students can lack behind from their peers. It can also be argued that students can find themselves in a situation where their fellow class mates are ahead of them not only in terms of academic studies but also in their professional career. It should also be taken into account that peer pressure can be lead to depression as well in some cases.
Those who argue for having a one year break have a different view and sat that it can actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that an individual can start the university with fresh mind which can help them stay more energized at the start of the university. Secondly, students can also complete any of their unfinished work which they were not able to fulfil in the past. For example, spending quality time with friends and family can also be added advantage.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that individuals can benefit more if they continue their studies without a one year off. I would strongly recommend taking short breaks rather than long breaks especially right after finishing school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 64, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that individuals can benefit more if...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in my view, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 6.10837438424 262% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66550522648 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36470134556 2.71678728327 87% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557491289199 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6098184718 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124185509186 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502654068703 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380549149344 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854309753563 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249539686569 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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