“The solution to the overpopulation of this planet is education.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations
The increasing population globally has become a debate these days. There are several solutions provided by the experts to overcome this issue. However, it is not that easy and some believe those solutions can be very challenging but they can still play important part if implemented globally, one of them is education. In my view, by providing education to our children, we can efficiently solve the problem of immense population. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument.
To begin with, there are many reasons why education can be a vital solution to overcome the overpopulation. The most conspicuous one is that education brings awareness, knowledge and sense of responsibility in an individual that helps them to analyse their current situation, some decision can be made based on the analysis. Furthermore, if any family has fewer sources of income but more family members, it can be difficult for them to make both ends meet. For example, when a family of 6 to 8 members to out to dine out, they may end up ordering less food to not only control their budget but also have a fair share of food among them.
Nevertheless, in some countries it can be very challenging to provide education at all levels. Some African countries like Uganda, Kenya and Nigeria do not have enough budgets assigned to education. This does not mean overpopulation cannot be control in such countries. Moreover, there is no support from government in rolling out awareness campaigns that will spread the awareness among people. For instance, as per the research done in University of Canada, population rate has decreased by 5.7% over the last 3 years after such campaigns were rolled out and stream lined at district level.
To conclude, I strongly suggest that overpopulation can be controlled by providing a high level of education and running awareness campaigns within the major cities. It is proven by the countries like China that controlling population can have immense impact on economic growth of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, for example, for instance, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 31.9359605911 166% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1207.87684729 140% => OK
No of words: 336.0 242.827586207 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02976190476 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87641688442 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 139.433497537 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 379.143842365 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4247759615 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.625 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.25397266985 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0831763712161 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347900297466 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413675157736 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0510965221053 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324386454037 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 55.0591133005 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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