"More information available online so library's
book are useless" or As e-books are available online
these days, the value of printed books has diminished.
Agree or disagree.
Advancement in technology and development in internet has provided people to get more information online rather than going to library was always a debatable topic. Many people claim that advantage of the information available on the internet is beneficial. Others reject this notion and argue that due to the online e-books availability libraries are getting closed. In my opinion, former proposition appears to be more rational. The following essay would further elaborate both sides with examples and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, in the first growing world technology is developing with rapid speed in all fields. More and more e-books are getting released in the internet. People can get any type of book or information on the single click on the internet network. Can access any book without any delay and can sit at home and read the book. For example, it is benefit for disabled people as they can't walk all the way to library to read books and newspapers.
In contrast, there are few concerns with the e-books. Firstly, spending excess time on laptops or computers can cause visual problems. Secondly, due to the e-books people are becoming more lazy as they can sit hours at home spending excess time on reading. Thirdly, due to the development of e-books many employees working in library, many writers and many more people are losing their jobs.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that even though there are some disadvantages of e-books its benefits are very useful to present world. In a nutshell, the advantages of e-books has overweighs the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... is benefit for disabled people as they cant walk all the way to library to read boo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for example, in contrast, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11895910781 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78124062275 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568773234201 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6590536512 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0625 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157115972867 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564789185156 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501171035485 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973230195415 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390483847317 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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