Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
I do not absolutely agree with the claim , but up to some extent I agree with it. Women are suited or not suited for certain task mainly depends on individual mentality. Uneducated people or people having conventional thinking could have this kind of thinking. For example, there were not any women pilot in Indian army. But now, the government allowed the recruitment of women in the army of the post of fighter pilot and there are women pilots in the army now.
As a number of educated people is increasing, this types of claims are becoming fallacious. Moreover, the number of educated women is increasing and they participated in the activities that were considered sinister for women for several years. For example, women were not allowed to drive cycle, motorcycle, etc. in India because it was assumed that they are physically weak. But now, women wend against the conventional thing and using cycle and motorcycles.
On the other hand, women sometimes show inability to perform a task. This situation can be arises for a limited duration. For example, a woman can work or can not lift heavy weight if she is pregnant or having her periods. There, it can be said that women are not suited for many task because of their inherent physical differences.
The way a society or individual thinks about women depends on the situation at that time. A situation could be sinister for women to work. Foe example, women cab drivers are not safe in India, and many cases about women security have been seen in India.
Finally, I do not completely agree with claim about unsuitability of women because their inherent physical differences. But, I do agree with the claim in some task.
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- Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks. 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion:
...any women pilot in Indian army. But now, the government allowed the recruitment o...
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Suggestion:
... thing and using cycle and motorcycles. On the other hand, women sometimes show ...
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Message: Did you mean 'heavyweight'?
Suggestion: heavyweight
...ample, a woman can work or can not lift heavy weight if she is pregnant or having her period...
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Suggestion: many tasks
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...women security have been seen in India. Finally, I do not completely agree with ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'for example', 'kind of', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25386996904 0.240241500013 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.151702786378 0.157235817809 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.077399380805 0.0880659088768 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0588235294118 0.0497285424764 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0402476780186 0.0444667217837 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.139318885449 0.12292977631 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0433436532508 0.0406280797675 107% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61679101488 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0123839009288 0.030933414821 40% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0804953560372 0.0997080785238 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0185758513932 0.0249443105267 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0030959752322 0.0148568991511 21% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1696.0 2732.02544248 62% => OK
No of words: 289.0 452.878318584 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86851211073 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.301038062284 0.366273622748 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221453287197 0.280924506359 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166089965398 0.200843997647 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103806228374 0.132149295362 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61679101488 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 219.290929204 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498269896194 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 48.8705999574 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.2105263158 23.380412469 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3196161161 59.4972553346 49% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2631578947 141.124799967 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2105263158 23.380412469 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.421052631579 0.674092028746 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 37.3558550355 51.4728631049 73% => OK
Elegance: 1.74074074074 1.64882698954 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362656330725 0.391690518653 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107995123964 0.123202303941 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.102965805123 0.077325440228 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.4867185194 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153537543731 0.149214159877 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129591896637 0.161403998019 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123025093586 0.0892212321368 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.250098517419 0.385218514788 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0930756053136 0.0692045440612 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227016692707 0.275328986314 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043000738182 0.0653680567796 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.