The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand , and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The graph illustrates the average daily maximum degrees of Celsius in two cities which are Auckland and Christchurch in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh in the United Kingdom.
Overall, the temperatures in two cities always keep in contrast, but the highest average average of temperature in New Zealand is higher than its in the United Kingdom.
On the one hand, in New Zealand, the average daily maximum temperatures in Christchurch are always lower than ones in Auckland. The highest temperature in Auckland is 24°C while in Christchurch is just around 23°C in February for both. Same as the trend, July is the month which owns the lowest temperature with about 15°C in Auckland and nearly 10°C in Christchurch.
On the other hand, in the United Kingdom, in February, the temperature in both London and Edinburgh reach the lowest temperature to about approximately 6°C. After that, the average daily maximum temperature in July in London increase more significant than one in Edinburgh in the same month, just around 21°C in London and 17°C in Edinburgh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: average
...lways keep in contrast, but the highest average average of temperature in New Zealand is higher...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16571428571 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84388925988 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457142857143 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8692981612 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.142857143 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448180260259 0.215688989381 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228787378683 0.103423049105 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142140893014 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322198812284 0.15604864568 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126093215523 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.