The two maps below the area of baton bigham in 1937 to 1995
As can be seen, from the map, the area of Barton Bigham changed significantly between 1937 and 1995.
first change can be seen in north of baton Birmingham ,the manor house converted to health farm ,the road that divided baton Birmingham in two part are extended as you can see the houses are increase near it ,In the south of area number of agriculture land increase and the marshland are destroy and wild fowl are increase ,and the east of lake marshland was converted to wild fowl /sanctuary by development of city the road exchange to rail war which was connected by a minor road to the main thoroughfare in 1991,the disused rail way line was reopened,with abridge being built across the road .in the busload to the east of the lake, a leisure complexly was completed and opened in 1993.
- The two maps below the area of Baton Bingham in 1937 to 1995 85
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- Some say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing peopletogether. To what extent do to you agree that the internet is making it easier forpeople to communicate with one another. 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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... significantly between 1937 and 1995. first change can be seen in north of baton Bi...
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...can be seen in north of baton Birmingham ,the manor house converted to health farm...
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... can see the houses are increase near it ,In the south of area number of agricultu...
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...ure land increase and the marshland are destroy and wild fowl are increase ,and the eas...
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...with abridge being built across the road .in the busload to the east of the lake, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 652.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62411347518 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54539787648 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 22.4926829268 311% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 294.0 43.030603864 683% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 326.0 112.824112599 289% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.5 22.9334400587 307% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164623807476 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198753241078 0.103423049105 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132896809337 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198753241078 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132896809337 0.0819641961636 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.6 13.2329268293 269% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.35 61.2550243902 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.2 10.3012195122 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.7 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.06136585366 127% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.9970731707 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.